Anything in life is possible; the question is how hard are you willing to work for it? Dominance, aggression, skill, fearlessness. These are the words that come to mind when one name is spoken: Alexander Ovechkin. It takes a lot to become a leader especially when you are the front man for the dynamic offensive machine that is The Washington Capitals. Pressure doesn’t come easy as the Caps found out last season in their quest for Lord Stanley’s coveted Cup. Instead of wallowing in the sorrows of being tormented by the Montreal Canadiens in last season’s playoff disaster the team has put forth a new focus, a new drive, a new future with more promises of a better outcome. There is no question that the Capitals top line of Nicklas Backstrom, Alexander Semin and Alexander Ovechkin are the best men in the business , they will make you play your best hockey and will out skill you. This team is even more terrifying if you add the components of the highest goal-scoring defenseman Mike Green and rookie goal-scoring defensive weapon John Carlson. This combination along with the face-off brilliance and tenacity of Tomas Fleischmann and David Steckel are enough to intimidate any opponent. Last year has quickly faded from the minds of the Caps. They only have one common goal this season and that is victory. Nothing will get in their way. Any rivals brave enough to attempt to rob the Capitals of their dream will be punished. Alex Ovechkin is out for blood, so Sidney Crosby and the Pittsburgh Penguins need to take caution as well as previous Stanley Cup winners the Chicago Blackhawks. Remember that anything in life is possible, rock the red. This season questions will become answers.
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Becca- Your selection of action terms, both verbs and adjectives, really gets one's blood flowing. I almost felt that I was at a game!
ReplyDeleteShould there be a new sentence beginning with They will make...? You have left yourself a good opportunity for visuals with by naming the various players and teams. Make sure you include a photo of the Stanley Cup. I didn't know his name was Lord Stanley! What music will you use?
Really good choice of strong actions and visually appealing diction. One will easily feel the strong sense of desire and will power from your story. All you need is so e epic music and stunning pictures to cap[s] it off...get it, haha.
ReplyDeleteI love the topic! I enjoyed the first one, but I think you are even more passionate about this. You can do so much with the images and overall movie. Great job, i'm sure it'll turn out perfect!
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